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August 20, 2012
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"My dear," said my lunar mate, Moon, "will you give me something to brighten this world?" I scoffed, "What, am I not bright enough for you?" "My dear, of course you are I just want something...more." Males, always needing more. It's always more, more, more with them. But I loved Moon so I complied. In an instant, we were surrounded by light. "We will name our first child the North Star." Moon smiled, his deep craters making up his wide grin. "Now you must give me something to give color to this world," I said smugly. He nodded, and the universe was covered in planets, planets with the most beautiful colors imaginable. "This one," he directed a beam of light onto the most beautiful one, "will be our golden child. We will name her Earth, and our dear Earth will house all the life in the universe." "She needs to be more... lively." Suddenly, she was teeming with life. From her continents to her oceans there was life, pure, innocent life. "Those," I directed a beam of light onto one of Earth's land creatures, "We will call those humans. They will think and act on their hearts. When they die they will join the us and our family as stars." Moon smiled once more, "You have truly outdone me, my dear."
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Inspired by some old creation stories I read. Written from the POV of the Sun.
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~BennyFaye Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What a cool concept. It's just so pleasant. And it's an intricate story despite it's brevity. Good show!
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~Mustelidae22445 Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! :)
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~BennyFaye Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome!
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!cawelling Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i got that the sun is the female in this story. i like it, from what i remember of creation stories the male takes center spot with the exception of a few native american origin tales it's a nice twist to the usual
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~Mustelidae22445 Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, your comments are very much appreciated!!! ;-) :D :D
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!cawelling Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
no problem. your work is really good, i might watch you if i find a few more i like.
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Lovely ^^ This was a nice little story to read about, taking on a new point of view on how the world and its inhabitants were created. I don't think I've ever seen this idea before....
I just have one correction (sorry, I just can't help myself ^^") 'what am I not bright enough for you?' should be 'what, am I not bright enough for you?' Anyway, good job! It was a great piece :)
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~Mustelidae22445 Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much! I'll be sure to correct that, thanks for noticing.
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~midnightrayne91 Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very pretty. I enjoyed it :)
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